So I smile

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Mantombi1
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So I smile

Post by Mantombi1 » 09 Jun 2018, 04:49

Countless frustrations having crowded my mind
Almost bounding holding captive my soul A happy me now only being a figmentation in my mind
This hold so strong A little bit of hope springs like a lily in a valley, springing up after a storm An indication that summer is coming better days are coming No longer familiar to this but I move my mouth slowly, cheeks lifting, frown disappearing and there it is
My teeth out in the open guided by the beautiful curvaceous lining from my mouth It feels different, but good As though a huge load has been lifted off my shoulders I cannot explain it much, all I know is that it feels better to do this It feels lighter

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