White Trash Wedding

[mland2000]

White T**** Wedding

The bride wore white
As her toddler raced up the aisle
Holding her makeshift bouquet,
She smiled at her live-in groom
Without the promise to obey.

As the minister turned dj
Pronounced their sentence,
The couple kissed till
“Get a room” entered the mind.
They whirled and smiled
As they charged down the aisle
Their cowboy clad friends
Applauding fiercely
Awaiting the reward of tri-tip, beer, and the dj/minister’s return
The inevitable money dance
A windfall of presents and
The honeymoon fund
Soon, the best man will pass out
Once this gift grab ends
But first, let the dirty dancing begin.

[Asueric0]

A nice and educative write-up, but the grammar can only be understood by literate I mean genuine literate men and women and not just average human. But all thesame, the write-up is educative.

[palilogy]

I enjoy the line let the dirty dancing begin
But a feeling I have throughout the poem is being told without seeing
I want to be there..but I'm not
Show don't tell =)