Out of touch

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Amonu
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Out of touch

Post by Amonu » 01 Jun 2018, 14:18

Time and time again
We spoke of a better day;
A good day not so warm
And we counted the minutes
As they flew by...
And we just couldn't wait!
From the other side,
I heard we would fly to the moon,
Make Love on Mars,
And cruise on Venus.
How it sounded so good to be true!
But I pinched myself
And it was just a dream.
I pinched myself again
And it may have been my imagination.
So I woke up
and I dreaded the day I slept.
I woke
And all I had were my words.
The dream was gone.
Something that good,
Can only exist in dreams and thoughts.
Once again,
I am scared to fall asleep
For I may only see a mirage,
For I may never get to touch you.

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Post by thaservices1 » 02 Jun 2018, 03:36

Very nice. I enjoyed the structure especially.
"It is not the critic that counts..."
- Roosevelt

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