Strangers

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Lonely loner
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Strangers

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Somewhere down the horizon
I will come looking for you.
We will meet and pass by like strangers.
But our shadows would tangle in a desperate hug.
Then for a minute or two
I will spend consuming your image
Your face with a brilliant smile
And the hair radiating under the sun.
Then you will walk into somebody else's arms
But I will be happy anyway
That you still exist
Much happier than once you used to be!
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Renny1738
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Post by Renny1738 »

Love it.
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Mantombi1
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Post by Mantombi1 »

This is beautiful
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Post by palilogy »

Oh this poem...I felt could be a bit darker.
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