DREAMS

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Izzie Carter
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DREAMS

Post by Izzie Carter » 26 May 2018, 19:05

In the dead of night..
Or the light of day..
You have all the power
As long as shut,my eyes.. stay.

I could live a lifetime..
I'd laugh and cry..
Or I'd die in seconds..
And wake up in fright

When its scary its a nightmare
When its not I forget
Sometimes it can be so perfect
I wake up and regret.

Sometimes I think I'm shown the future
Other times I know it's just the past
Scientists say it's my subconscious
Spiritualist say it's more than that.

it doesn't matter what we believe
It's another plane to explore
so close your eyes, fall asleep
And welcome to a whole new world.
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Post by Lee khan » 26 May 2018, 23:21

I see the dilemma # visual image. Ironies of life is the title I can give to such a poem

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Post by Izzie Carter » 27 May 2018, 08:21

Oh really?.. dreams is inappropriate?

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Post by thaservices1 » 02 Jun 2018, 04:36

I vote Morpheus. 😉
"It is not the critic that counts..."
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