I STILL LOVE YOU

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I STILL LOVE YOU

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I STILL LOVE YOU

Alone I lie
Brain cells on full-time
The memory lane's
Where I currently reside
How stupid I was
I thought I could
Receive love and kindness from you
But shattered you left me
With the shreds of my heart
Deserted me like gutter waters
You made me lose my true nature
My worth, my confidence
All down the drain
What I need is you
Could you please revive this grain?
Erase all this pain
Glue the shreds of my heart
Shower me with your rain of love
Come hold me in your arms
Let all remain as it all began
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