Who Is Eve?

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Who Is Eve?

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She is that girl you always meet,
As you walk down a busy street;

That officegirl across the hall,
Or someone's partner at a ball;

That dearest love now in your arms,
Or song diva with haughty charms,

Covered with beauty's coat-of-mail;
Or well exposed, in fashion's trail;

Are cavemen spared these glaring sights?
Just clubbing Eve on mating nights?

Of lore and myths sages employ,
Nefertiti, Helen of Troy,

How it escapes comprehension,
Eve's mysterious predilection;

What is she made of, cream and spice?
And liking men, but fearing mice?

Adam knows not how Eves are done,
He was asleep when God made one.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

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The ending is beautiful. I think the poet was differentiating between good women and bad women. That's what I felt.
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Akosua + wrote: 18 May 2018, 12:30 The ending is beautiful. I think the poet was differentiating between good women and bad women. That's what I felt.
It's just that Eve is on all walks of life. Thanks for commenting.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: 07 May 2018, 18:26 She is that girl you always meet,
As you walk down a busy street;

That officegirl across the hall,
Or someone's partner at a ball;

That dearest love now in your arms,
Or song diva with haughty charms,

Covered with beauty's coat-of-mail;
Or well exposed, in fashion's trail;

Are cavemen spared these glaring sights?
Just clubbing Eve on mating nights?

Of lore and myths sages employ,
Nefertiti, Helen of Troy,

How it escapes comprehension,
Eve's mysterious predilection;

What is she made of, cream and spice?
And liking men, but fearing mice?

Adam knows not how Eves are done,
He was asleep when God made one.
Various type of women you meet in life. Nice poem. The rhymes in this art work just made the poem come alive.
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Thank you @biscuits. I appreciate so much your comment.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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Wow! That was excellent! Thank you for sharing. I agree with biscuits, a work of art.
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thaservices1 wrote: 02 Jun 2018, 04:49 Wow! That was excellent! Thank you for sharing. I agree with biscuits, a work of art.
Thanks again.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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