Still Unbroken

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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thisgirl818
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Still Unbroken

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I'm still unbroken
Even when you left me
Even when you rejected me
I'm still here stronger than ever

I'm still unbroken
No matter how you say it
No matter how hard you try
No matter how you pray for it

I'm still unbroken
So many years gone
So many restlessness night
I still made it after all

I'm still unbroken
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Tamaralitta
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Post by Tamaralitta »

The poem is good
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edithchemutai
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Post by edithchemutai »

wow!! very clear and straight to the point,excellent piece.
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This is brilliant.
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