Tell Me

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thisgirl818
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Tell Me

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Tell me you love me one more time
tell me you love me a dozen times
I am a thornless rose
You can conveniently hold me and instantly break me

Tell me you love more than the stars
Tell me you love me more than you'll ever know
I am made of fool's gold
Alluring yet deceptive to the eyes of everyone

Tell me you love me one last time
Tell me you love me one breath at a time
I am aloof and a jerk
Been in love with you this far with all crude words
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Akosua +
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Post by Akosua + »

Simple poem. It reminds readers of boy and girl relationships
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