Time is life

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Time is life

Post by Eniefiok Goodnews » 23 Apr 2018, 12:15

Time as the T in time
Is trying to say
Time is the beginning, master piece and end of life
It tans in our heart like a tanning tambour
It's slow to move but as swift as a spreading rumour
It sings in our heart
As if it was to say
Be a sapient and not a hick
Cause with sapience we will realise
That time is the beginning, master piece and end of life Tanning tick tock, tick tock, tick tock
Even as we tell our tales of life

It's as the I in time is trying to say
It's time to shine and not to cry of sou or be so-so
Don't be a hick
Rather stretch for a height
Then you will realise
That time, it's the beginning, master piece and end of life
Tanning tick tock, tick tock, tick tock
Even as we tell our tales of life

Master piece as the M in time
Is trying to say
Time is the great master piece of life
Only a man of sapient who is as wise
Will pay the price and take a rise
Cause only a man of sapience will realise
That time, it's the beginning, master piece and end of life
Tanning tick tock, tick tock, tick tock
Even as we tell our tales of life

E ends in time so it ends in life
Then I guess this must be the end of the line
See you in a new world when I wake at dawn
Sharing our tales of life
We will realise
That time, it's the beginning, master piece and end of life Tanning tick tock, tick tock, tick tock
Even as they tell our tales of life

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Post by thaservices1 » 02 Jun 2018, 03:33

Very interesting.
"It is not the critic that counts..."
- Roosevelt

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