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Okoromiko Daniel
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My Heart very empty and shallow, i decided to fill it. Looked around found you and i was afraid you were too good for me but i concluded that nobody is perfect. Being the guy i approched you but not showing my true intention, as time goes on i decided to ease myself of the burden and to revel my heart desire to you but all i got was a thank you which caused me a temporary heart failure. Took some medications and gained some inspirations in order to get healed because am not giving up on this heartfelt desire and i feel it was right with feelings coming from both angles. I decided to add you to my life event but i was ulterly flabbergasted by your contradicting response that it killed my heart. I really don't know were the problem was but i won't admit it was from you, i think i was all wrong by not either laying a proper foundation or restructuring. Right now my heart has reseted, am now back with a shallow and empty HEART.#IThinkITriedOh..........
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