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Lilly bn
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it hurt when I'm with you fooling myself you won't be apart.
Is it love when my heart screams when he noticed you.
Is it hapinnes to be in your armes.
I heard then saying it was safety.
I owned you and you owned me but I guess that was only in my mind
You gaved me comfort
Heaven on ugly earth
And I still love u and I'll always do
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Abbigailyankey48
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Post by Abbigailyankey48 »

This passage is vary relatable and well written. I found it to be a lovely and heartwarming story with all the components of the pain and love that comes from being in love
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Post by crediblereading2 »

I guess we all think this way when we really love someone and is afraid of losing that person.
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