My Devotion

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My Devotion

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Your love has kept in detention It's like i'm lost iam in my heaven The overwhelming feeling of touching you makes feel like i'm abondened by my mind. The Smell of your perfume tells an enchanting story,when night falls a beatiful portrait of you is painted in my dreams Aproaching you will be my mission My Devotion let me sing you a four letter song to show you and make you understand how truly devoted I'm ,actually i do not no what to do because my heart adores you. Despite your beaty you still an humble lady. Saying how much i love will need me to get a publisher because that could be a book containing one chapter Of saying how much i love you. My Devotion
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