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Mahlonkinq19
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YOU ALONE

Post by Mahlonkinq19 »

This my first time of publishing my writing to the public hope you'll like it



I'm in the darker side of life and you alone can light up my world
And so believe that together we can do the impossible and so much more
I may be ok on my own
but i know i'll be much more better with you
Idon't want to go on this journey alone;
cause its just feels much better with you
You got to get it right while you have the time
Cause when you close your heart you close your mind..
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Post by cc+juelfs »

This poem is beautiful! I love it!
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Post by _ibyang »

The poem is nice and beautiful but I feel there is lacking on the last part. :)
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