THE BURDEN IN MY HEART

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Cliffe1997
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THE BURDEN IN MY HEART

Post by Cliffe1997 » 23 Mar 2018, 03:01

I have a burden I am carrying,
This burden of love I am carrying,
The noble city of the love am carrying,
Where I used to enter and deposit,
All this love that lies heavily,
In all the chambers of my heart,
All the gates to this city are closed,
And where will I take this burden,
This burden of love that lies heavily,
In all the chambers of my heart?

Oh this love that is too overprotective,
Oh this love that is unbreakable,
Oh this love that persecute my heart,
Oh this love that made me swear,
Oh this love that made me promise,
Oh this love that I laid curse upon,
Oh this love that chained me,
Oh this love that I will keep promise,
Until I see our desired destiny,
Until I put a SEAL on this NOBLE LOVE!
~ Wycliffe Cliffe

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Post by Libs_Books » 23 Mar 2018, 04:56

That's an intriguing poem - I was wondering if you originally envisaged it set to music. It seems to have an almost balladic feel to it, but then I could also imagine it as a blues number.

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