Through All The Eyes

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Sable Raven
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Through All The Eyes

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I want to see the world
Through all the eyes
7 billion portals open
Each to a different sky
All the broken pieces spinning
Kaleidoscope beads
I want to see what is
I want to see humanity
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DATo
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Very nice poem and written like a true citizen of the world.

I think you might enjoy this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kYXiegTXsEs
“I just got out of the hospital. I was in a speed reading accident. I hit a book mark and flew across the room.”
― Steven Wright
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Thank you :D

And you were right, that was very interesting.
Perspective is SO important, and all you have to do to get it is really listen to people before you judge.
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