Time
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Time
{what is time
do we have it
did we ever
more like an illusion
like the faint memory
of a delicacy
long eaten
are we illusionists
to pretend
we have time
we share precious time
with others;
or liars
what do we do
what do we say
should we do anything
running out of time
- are we?
still frozen
still broken
still hoping
- are we?
let’s run out of time
and conquer it
let’s make our own fate
because we don’t need war
to fight
for what we love
we couldn’t have chosen love
more naturally}
from my work Remnants of Time
s.g.r. (Steve's letters)
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"what do we do
what do we say
should we do anything
running out of time
- are we?
still frozen
still broken
still hoping
- are we?
let’s run out of time "
Example: Working on the transition between the stanzas
Example : Consider "let's run out of time" on its own line