Hush-A-Bye-Baby (Updated)

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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
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Hush-A-Bye-Baby (Updated)

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Hush-A-Bye-Baby (Updated)

Hush-a-bye-baby
On the lap top
When its piss flows
The space bar will spark
When its piss leaks
The cursor will stall
Reset removes baby
Google and all.
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Brilliant, Revyrex! I feel that will stop with me! Come to think of it, isn't the original of that a seriously weird little poem?
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