Love Sonnet 132

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Love Sonnet 132

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Love Sonnet 132

At times, when I, my lowly state assess,
Find only much too small a feat to boast,
And lesser still the wealth I do possess,
Though now, away from youth my life would coast;
High titles, I have none, and honors nil,
No person quotes my name, my deeds unsung,
I fall in line like everyone, until,
The daylights from this life are fully wrung;
But when you called, my love, with love you bring,
With lauding voice that's clarion to my ears,
It heralds of my worth, so flattering,
That now my humble self a trophy bears;
......And how this feeling so uplifts my soul,
......The world, I seem to own from pole to pole.

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"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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I love your sonnets, Revyrex, they are so graceful and intense!
An Eye for an Eye only ends up making the whole world blind.

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Lincolnshirelass wrote: 08 Feb 2018, 04:20 I love your sonnets, Revyrex, they are so graceful and intense!
Thanks. You're generous with your inborn words.

They are just a few. I am on book reading now.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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What a sonnet! Every line with powerful feelings of love.Indeed without a mismatch.
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Justin Kamanga wrote: 08 Feb 2018, 15:38 What a sonnet! Every line with powerful feelings of love.Indeed without a mismatch.
Thanks for your uplifting comment.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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