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A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 02 Feb 2018, 08:31
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
A Silly Fairytale
Once there was a lady
who schemed for a prince to marry.
She arranged that her man
be turned to a frog for her plan.
Kissed frog turns Prince, voila!
That was the magic formula.
But the Wizard said: 'No! '
'There is one thing you should know.'
If frog is a cursed prince
As Fairy Tales say ever since.
The common men and others
only turn to salamanders.
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 03 Feb 2018, 01:14
by Superpanda13
This girl is acting actually kinda selfish in this because of the fact that she wants to turn him into a frog so she can marry him. She would probably still marry him afterward because why go through ALL that trouble for nothing. Maybe even if everyone was a salamanser
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 03 Feb 2018, 02:02
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
Superpanda13 wrote: ↑03 Feb 2018, 01:14
This girl is acting actually kinda selfish in this because of the fact that she wants to turn him into a frog so she can marry him. She would probably still marry him afterward because why go through ALL that trouble for nothing. Maybe even if everyone was a salamander
Thanks for your reply. You said the girl is selfish? Well, in turning the man into a frog and then kissing the frog, she will have turned the man into a prince. Isn't that an improvement on the man's status?
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 04 Feb 2018, 02:21
by Luckybug101
It is infact not giving him a hand out but a hand up, as you said, his status grows exponentially because of the work,the patients, and the love she had for that man (Soon To be instant made king).
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 04 Feb 2018, 07:14
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
Luckybug101 wrote: ↑04 Feb 2018, 02:21
It is infact not giving him a hand out but a hand up, as you said, his status grows exponentially because of the work,the patients, and the love she had for that man (Soon To be instant made king).
Yes, the man will be made a king and the woman will be queen. So, she is hitting two birds with one stone.
Thanks for your reply.
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 05 Feb 2018, 04:50
by Lincolnshirelass
Love it, Revyrex, and thinking it would also make a splendid animation!
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 05 Feb 2018, 06:18
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
Lincolnshirelass wrote: ↑05 Feb 2018, 04:50
Love it, Revyrex, and thinking it would also make a splendid animation!
Haha Lassie, this is good as children's humorous cartoon piece. It carries a lesson. lol.
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 29 Jun 2018, 09:20
by KatSims92
I like this twist on fairy tales. I always enjoy fairy tale-inspired poetry.
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 29 Jun 2018, 10:11
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
KatSims92 wrote: ↑29 Jun 2018, 09:20
I like this twist on fairy tales. I always enjoy fairy tale-inspired poetry.
Thanks for your comment. That inspires me.
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 12 Jul 2018, 16:50
by akinwale1841
Revyrex, what a splendid poem
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 13 Jul 2018, 02:16
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
akinwale1841 wrote: ↑12 Jul 2018, 16:50
Revyrex, what a splendid poem
Thanks
akinwale1841
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 16 Jul 2018, 00:56
by Raniaadderly
very nice poem
Re: A Silly Fairytale
Posted: 17 Jul 2018, 06:23
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
Thank you. Very much needed that nice comment. It's music to my ears.