Poem for a dearly missed Mom

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Poem for a dearly missed Mom

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You and I on a starry night
Sitting up close we're mother and child
My body feels cold outside
But I think it's colder inside

I know there's a wound inside you
Let me heal it for you
Broken heart, broken spirit
Let's fix it, it's not too late.

But the Almighty has called you back home
To show what He has in store for you
Then I realized you left me alone
Knowing in this world, there's no other 'you'

How can I reach your heart
Now that we are a lifetime apart
I guess I'll be spending some nights
With a memory of you by my side.
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I have been sitting at my computer for five minutes trying to find the proper words with which to respond to your poem. I can only think of one .... (((HUGS))).
“I just got out of the hospital. I was in a speed reading accident. I hit a book mark and flew across the room.”
― Steven Wright
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This is such a beautiful poem and I'm sure God has you in His hands, keep up the good work!
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Thank you! Tears never miss to fill my eyes everytime I read it.
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