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momma182
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For Life

Post by momma182 » 16 Jan 2018, 19:38

For love we wait,
For hope we try;
For peace we pray,
For hate we cry;
For freedom we wish,
For food we buy;
For life we work,
For war we die.

SKParsons

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Post by Lincolnshirelass » 17 Jan 2018, 04:02

Brief and beautiful - thank you!
An Eye for an Eye only ends up making the whole world blind.

Mahatma Gandhi

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Post by momma182 » 17 Jan 2018, 20:04

Thank you. :)

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Post by mySteve_96 » 18 Jan 2018, 15:53

Very nice and calming!

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Post by momma182 » 19 Jan 2018, 15:54

mySteve_96 wrote:
18 Jan 2018, 15:53
Very nice and calming!
Thanks, I never really thought about it, but it is isn't it.

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Post by KatSims92 » 29 Jun 2018, 09:57

I love how simply it gets to the point. Deep, but understandable for all who read it. Nice work!

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