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Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Miss Gee
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Battlefield

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Hidden veil in my chest,
How can I rest?
A fantasy I should never start
For you, I grind and fight
a battle at night
where I am my own knight.
My transition is great,
from greenshades to sawdust,
blacksheep to outcast
My only vision to be light in my own night.
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sagar999
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Post by sagar999 »

Nic ,like it😏😏😏😏
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Post by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes »

Nice expressive poem.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
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I like it! Very meaningful and deep! 👏
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Post by KatSims92 »

I like this a lot. The images are very moving and get the themes across nicely.
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