The depth

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Swetha Suresh
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The depth

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The day when Budding begin ,
Is the day when it's fall Begins too !
The fear of falling may stop us...
But the moment we realize,
That blossoming lies in between these
Is when our frown turns to smile ,
And that smile of determination is
The Depth of why we were created!
The soul core of the happiness lies
Not in succeeding but
In the very first step with the hope that
We are towards something big !
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Post by Angel West »

Like the idea of being about the journey and the blossoming, not the beginning or end.
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Post by AngMS »

It needs work on the word play but I do love what you are getting at!
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