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lacunamarivic
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Post by lacunamarivic »

I.
Love, sprout on us so fast
And this feelings last forever
I never thought it would be,
You and I forever

Chorus:
If there's love,
If theres trust
nothing could ever ever
Break us
We will be standing still
Even if the world is against us
coz you and me
Will never ever be
Broken apart

II.
Trust, will tie our hearts
And it will make us more stronger
we will fight for this love,
They will all see what we have..
What we have

(Repeat chorus)

Stay in my life and I'll stay in your arms
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Nice composition! I would love to listen to its melody though.😊
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I like this song, I'd love to hear this to its melody as well.
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