When I Dream

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When I Dream

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?When I Dream?!

When I dream, I dream of ice cream, so soft and sweet!

When I dream, I have nice dreams, dreams that reminds me of the times we spent together.

When I dream, I can't help but to have the same reoccurring dream, I had long ago.

When I dream, I dreams in pieces, pieces of sweet's, that reminds me of your sweet, sweet, kisses.

When I dream, I dream in pieces, pieces of soft clouds, that reminds me of your silky soft skin.

So my love, every time I'm dreaming of ice cream, I will be dreaming of you.

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Larry Wyatt Perry Sr.
11/09/2017
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laperr2922 wrote: 27 Nov 2017, 00:50 ?When I Dream?!

When I dream, I dream of ice cream, so soft and sweet!

When I dream, I have nice dreams, dreams that reminds me of the times we spent together.

When I dream, I can't help but to have the same reoccurring dream, I had long ago.

When I dream, I dreams in pieces, pieces of sweet's, that reminds me of your sweet, sweet, kisses.

When I dream, I dream in pieces, pieces of soft clouds, that reminds me of your silky soft skin.

So my love, every time I'm dreaming of ice cream, I will be dreaming of you.

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Larry Wyatt Perry Sr.
11/09/2017
Are you Larry Wyatt Perry Sr.? Is this your original composion? 😊
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Yes I'm Larry Wyatt Perry, Sr. Yes this is my original composition
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So sweet of you. You must have been reciting poems to your wife. So fortunate of her. 😍
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