And You Make Me Feel This Way Again

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Thirielle
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And You Make Me Feel This Way Again

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And so you're gone,
But I'm here, not able to run.
It's so sad you know?
Well this poem is not really for fun.

I know you know I'm talking about you,
You are the reason why now I feel oh so blue.
I hate that you have to leave without a clue,
Guess I'll be waiting again with that dog they called Blue.

Hey wait! I forgot I don't have a canine,
You should remember "that" promise that's now mine.
So save the date it's August Nine,
Wait what?! It's Seven, am I fine!?

You are now a thousand miles away from me,
I don't know what to do without you saying "Mamii".
Even if its just a day, I miss you oh so much Dadii,
I'll kiss you tons when you come back, yiiiepee! :)

I kind of miss our fights and I know its crazy,
I'll be choosing all of it than to lose you Hanii.
I love you much more than you know Dearie,
But please, dont make me cry again, okidokie?

Babe it's now raining, do you remember something?
Oh how I love the rain drops but no! You're not coming.
It's really sad but all I can do is nothing,
Hmm.. Let me rephrase that, "Baby, I'll be waiting :)"

Dedicated for my forever love ♥
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