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Thirielle
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Post by Thirielle »

You are sweet like candy, chocolate and grapes,
Grapes it is because it sounds like cakes.
You are free to mention all the sweets you want,
Just be careful 'coz the ants will hunt.

Look at me and tell me what d'you wanna bake,
I have this cirle face but I guess it's not a cake.
They say I'm sweet and I cannot believe it,
Why? My bestfriend laughed until he cannot breath.

This poem wont take very long so I'll say this once,
I wanna thank you until the very last ounce.
Your nice words have overwhelmed my precious heart,
So forever I'll treasure it until death do us part!

This poem was created way back 2014. One of my fave among all my poems :) I forgot why I created it and to whom I created it for. Oh well.
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Post by laperr2922 »

Short and to the point. It seems like you should have had more likes. Anyway I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work ?
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Post by Thirielle »

laperr2922 wrote: 28 Nov 2017, 02:08 Short and to the point. It seems like you should have had more likes. Anyway I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work ?
thanks laperr. I appreaciate it :) I just really enjoyed writing poems. <3
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