Wake Me Up When September Ends

[Thirielle]

September is getting near,
You'll soon be married, oh dear.
I hope this poem made it clear,
That I don't really drink beer.

Let's throw a party, shall we?
Hey! Who's the flower girl? It's Me!
Wait. Do you really invite Summie?
Oh gosh! I should not expect Phoebee!

I remember I still don't have an invitation,
Guess you don't have any plan giving me attention.
But it's okay Sir Chief, I really don't mind,
And I know that love really makes you blind.

I just remembered you still awe me a coffee,
Wait what? Summie doesn't really want calorie.
I mean, okay fine I'll drink that bitter sweet honey,
Just be sure that it's 101% free, okidokie??

Cut all the crap, I'm talking about your wedding,
Soooo.. I really do hope you'll wear her that ring.
Take care of her, she's now one of my crushes,
Because if you don't , I'll burn you into ashes.

Should I really end this poem now?
Okay but I hope you liked it and say wow.
I'm wishing you all the best Spongebob,
All your happiness should be like a surprise mob.

I created this poem way back 3 years ago, when my crush (who is a close friend) is getting married. And yep, this poem is for him.

[laperr2922]

Very interesting poem, I liked it. It has a lot of humor to it. Wow! Nicely done ?

[nochu_13]

Wow. If i am to write a poem for my crush who's nearly getting married, it will probably sound stupid and bitter. Your work is perfectly nice. Good job.

[Dolor]

September is getting near,
You'll soon be married, oh dear.
I hope this poem made it clear,
That I don't really drink beer.

Let's throw a party, shall we?
Hey! Who's the flower girl? It's Me!
Wait. Do you really invite Summie?
Oh gosh! I should not expect Phoebee!

I remember I still don't have an invitation,
Guess you don't have any plan giving me attention.
But it's okay Sir Chief, I really don't mind,
And I know that love really makes you blind.

I just remembered you still awe me a coffee,
Wait what? Summie doesn't really want calorie.
I mean, okay fine I'll drink that bitter sweet honey,
Just be sure that it's 101% free, okidokie??

Cut all the crap, I'm talking about your wedding,
Soooo.. I really do hope you'll wear her that ring.
Take care of her, she's now one of my crushes,
Because if you don't , I'll burn you into ashes.

Should I really end this poem now?
Okay but I hope you liked it and say wow.
I'm wishing you all the best Spongebob,
All your happiness should be like a surprise mob.

I created this poem way back 3 years ago, when my crush (who is a close friend) is getting married. And yep, this poem is for him.

If you did not paste a note, I would've thought it's fun.

[Thirielle]

haha well. I'm glad I did post a note

[Thirielle]

Very interesting poem, I liked it. It has a lot of humor to it. Wow! Nicely done ?

Thank you!

[Thirielle]

Wow. If i am to write a poem for my crush who's nearly getting married, it will probably sound stupid and bitter. Your work is perfectly nice. Good job.

thank nochu! Haha. He's a funny guy and a close friend so I'm not really bitter whatsoever. I'm actually really happy for him.

[Frenjie]

Wow, interesting! I like how creatively you've turned into a beautiful and humorous poem your (supposed to be sad) experience. Well done!

[Dolor]

September is getting near,
You'll soon be married, oh dear.
I hope this poem made it clear,
That I don't really drink beer.

Let's throw a party, shall we?
Hey! Who's the flower girl? It's Me!
Wait. Do you really invite Summie?
Oh gosh! I should not expect Phoebee!

I remember I still don't have an invitation,
Guess you don't have any plan giving me attention.
But it's okay Sir Chief, I really don't mind,
And I know that love really makes you blind.

I just remembered you still awe me a coffee,
Wait what? Summie doesn't really want calorie.
I mean, okay fine I'll drink that bitter sweet honey,
Just be sure that it's 101% free, okidokie??

Cut all the crap, I'm talking about your wedding,
Soooo.. I really do hope you'll wear her that ring.
Take care of her, she's now one of my crushes,
Because if you don't , I'll burn you into ashes.

Should I really end this poem now?
Okay but I hope you liked it and say wow.
I'm wishing you all the best Spongebob,
All your happiness should be like a surprise mob.

I created this poem way back 3 years ago, when my crush (who is a close friend) is getting married. And yep, this poem is for him.

You made an eloquent poem. Congratulations! I noticed you wrote "awe" instead of owe and "surprise" should have been "surprised".

I hope you don't mind my corrections. ♡

[ReyvrexQuestor Reyes]

This is a humorous poem. And it has good rhyme. Great.