Overcoming Sorrow

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ANDREW MBAGO
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Overcoming Sorrow

Post by ANDREW MBAGO »

Your death was a sharp needle.
It deeply penetrated our hearts.
We sorrowed and mourned heartily.
And filled many buckets with tears.
But whether we sorrowed and mourned,
I know that won't bring you back to life.
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Kuznec
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Post by Kuznec »

Good verse, philosophical. It reminds you that you should never forget about your loved ones.
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ANDREW MBAGO
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Post by ANDREW MBAGO »

Thank you Kuznec for your thoughts and feelings.

Keep on reading!
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