What have I done?

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Kenisha Hyde
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What have I done?

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Now I stand while you fall
But still I have failed
Though I stand
I can't stand tall
look at what I have done
I broke you to fix me
I blinded you so that I could see

Now I smile at your demise
As though a part of me
Isnt lying at your side.

What have I done?
Is it any less than you deserve?
Say goodbye to the good in me
it did not survive the impact of you.
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Kuznec
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I like this style, not everything is clear, but it sounds beautiful.
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