Passion Unleashed

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Passion Unleashed

Post by asiangirl22 » 12 Aug 2017, 14:00

PASSION UNLEASHED

Tonight, I'll get lost in the sweetness of your lips,
Map your entire body with my steamy fingertips,
Indulge into the cravings of my soul,
I want you and yours, and all.
Tonight, I’ll unleash this volcanic passion,
I want some hot, intense, filthy action!
Come here, yeah, you come my stallion,
Rock my world, it’s loaded with emotion.
Hold me, grab me tight, love me thru the night,
Take me to the peak of that heavenly light,
Tonight calls for an erotic celebration,
As we witness both of our worlds’ eruption.

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Post by Kuznec » 18 Aug 2017, 13:46

Wow, what a passion, it's wonderful. It is very rare to find such frankness in verse.

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Post by asiangirl22 » 18 Aug 2017, 20:52

Hi Kuznec,

Thank you for your comments. Pretty bold indeed... :-)

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Post by KatSims92 » 29 Jun 2018, 10:11

I agree that this is really passionate and you do so well with evoking those feelings. Great job!

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