Our Children
- Gingin
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Our Children
Happiness is what they're bringin'
Parents priceless treasure and token
Cannot be borrowed nor can be taken.
Children are God's gift from up above
They are our mother's greatest love.
Educate them well so they will learn
For they are your charming intern.
Their smiles are innocent and pure,
Their eyes are not cynical at all;
Children always love to have some fun,
It's their nature, we should understand.
Honesty is what they all possess
In a world where lies, never at rest
Constant love should take place
So they may grow with great qualities.
Children's education is very important
It's an attainment that cannot be hunt
The knowledge and wisdom they have gain
Are essential tool that cannot be taken.
By: Gingin Bonita
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keep writing Gingin Bonita.
- Ambreen Kiran
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Interesting one
Really a Deep message in it.. Like it
- Gingin
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I have seen this idea and these lines before.
Consider putting you and your experience of children into the poem.
Use specifics and less generalizations.
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I would love to know what inspired you to write this poem!