Sweet Dreams

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Mashell Chapeyama
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Re: Sweet Dreams

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A sensible poem; theme well explored. It is all about sleep, failing to sleep due to anxieties etc. It flows well and is poetic. The tone is ok.
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Hahaha that is funny,great poem. Kudos
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