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and came out in the desolated field.
The plants that sprung up the minute
my foot touched the ground .
The whole field, what is this?
I thought to myself with amazement still lingering .
Ah! I realized in a minutes, the field,
As the mind of a human being .
And the plants on the field I recognized
as the feeling of mind the sweet flowers,
Which covered on side, went the thought of happiness .
In the trees I recognized the kindness
which benefits others. Ah? On the
other side what I saw made me sad .
Oh! I saw the land covered with rocks
it gave the ilk appearance of a barren land.
The barren land was indeed the sorrow,
The nettles, which was seen in abundance,
reminded me of the cruelty, jealousy and
other evil intention of the mind .
The middle of the field was a beautiful lake .
covered with weeds and marshy was the
appearance in one side of the lake.
The lake on the other side was
indeed a picture to the seen.
To the lake I walked unthinkingly .
I looked in to the marshy side,
it was the sin committed by the person.
Oh! its my mind i realized.
I was shattered beyond words .
for my sins appears to be numerous.
Relief beyond words were poured the
minute I saw the surface of
the beautiful lake on the other side .
I understood that this was the lake
‘Reflection of Life’ which analyses us.
I prayed to God to wash away my sins.
Lo! Miracle of miracles a light spread
From the middle of Lake it spread
Like air I felt happiness surroundings.
Oh! I was woken by the beam of sunlight
Was I dreaming for I was in my bed
I understand that this was the test of Lord.
P.s: I wrote this 10 years back in my schooldays.I have not yet written anything this lengthy again. I am wondering whether to start writing again or not. Also English is my second language.
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You are very good with images and bringing that vivid feeling to the reader =)