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elephlora
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you. you make my dreams come alive
like a world in a painting
we both are..never harsh, always waiting
I try to stand by and look deep within your eyes
as they soul search mine trying to analyze what's inside
our bond is something novel yet familiar
bringing me so close I can't fe-ar but only fe-el far
words ramble worlds crumble
I feel as though I'm falling apart
only because I'm falling, crawling
I'm losing my heart
the gears in my mind crank and twist
waiting for my heart to succumb to bliss
only to find that I've no time
to let loose and give free
give us free you see the universe somehow put us together you and me
and no matter how I really feel
I can swear that the minds gears and its wheel..
are turning against the two tides of my heart
both split apart between ..
to do? or to feel?..
I know and yet I continue to be reeled//
inside this no sense you've cultivated
since it's a supreme work and innovated by..
the master of designs is behind all these plans
yet I just want to know from you where do we stand

I don't care for a future or the past
I don't care for this moment to last.. lust!
I don't care for a lust or infatuation.
been there, done that
I just want no limiting hesitations
for .. for once
reality has met his ideality
and a dreamer her artist
yet somehow bridging both, seems to be the hardest
I care for you and where your heart will be
only because my spirit sees a different reality
what's great now may not last forever..
yet.. even though obligation cries, this bond I wish not to sever

never so good was a man with a woman
receptive to the winds she's constantly blowing

I can ramble and shamble and smoke my time
but I just want you to know that you'll always be mine
as in..
for respect or for intrigue I keep you in my mind
yet I'm not sure the purpose of all this.. because of my time.

what's a good man in a bad time
and a bad one in a good time
reason has found a bland rhyme
since both are one, both are denied

love and truth "transcend " .. still I'm bound to a confine
where the world calls for greatness I choose to be ever sublime

my focus and calling must be aligned
or I'll sit here and write.. rhyme after rhyme.

you found a new thing
I thought I found a new fling
until I realized you the type to give a ring and still let me sing ..
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