Oh joy

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Oliviachan
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Oh joy

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Oh joy where have you gone?
Oh joy have you abandoned me?
Oh joy its been so long
Oh joy can you not see?
Oh joy how can you move on?
Oh joy my heart still weeps
Oh joy where have you gone?
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Linaspjut
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This deep yet soul anchoring poem makes me question the essence of joy and sadness and the parallels between light and darkness. Keep on writing Olivia chan great work
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