IRONY bY Ana kandwal
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IRONY bY Ana kandwal
They accused him of being a terrorist who killed the sons of the soil.
People celebrated the death and mothers smiled with teary eyes.
It was the celebration of Justice.
They raised the slogan- ‘Long live the Truth.’
On the other side of the border, the news of execution reached.
They praised him for being a martyr who saved the sons of the soil.
People celebrated the death and mothers smiled with teary eyes.
It was the celebration of Sacrifice.
They raised the slogan- ‘Long live the Truth.’
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Though your poem definitely tells a "short story" I think it would be more properly represented in the Creative Original Works: Poetry section.
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Thank you so much for your invaluable advice. I will modify this piece as you said, as it seems perfect. Also, many thanks for appreciating and understanding the deep image.DATo wrote:In every conflict the combatants always believe that God is on their side. I think you captured the essence of this thought perfectly with your poem. Nicely written but I would change the first sentence of the second stanza to, News of the execution reached the other side of the border.
Though your poem definitely tells a "short story" I think it would be more properly represented in the Creative Original Works: Poetry section.
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