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Adakage
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You seemed to have had a plan,
Reaching high,
surpassing the deep blue sky,
Confident and bright,
Enjoying every moment of the night,
Whereas now? Filled with anxious doubts,
Suffering, hiding from the seeker's looks,
Will you find yourself again?
Do you even know who i am?
The answer is among these lines,
So go searching for a way to rise!
Have you not understood?
The only real enemy is you
yourself and your doubts.
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Hot d***, I love this.
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Thank you! :)
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You're welcome!!
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