Touch of warmth

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Thesaurus Rex
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Touch of warmth

Post by Thesaurus Rex » 12 May 2015, 08:24

Touch of warmth,
taste of heaven,
waking me up at sunrise.
Not a day goes by
that I don't need you,
feel your warmth
taste your heaven.
But one day
you're not there.
A single tear
and my heart breaks.
My soul crumbles.
Life is misery
without your warmth
and taste of heaven.
Next time
I will buy
a larger supply
of coffee.

-- 20 May 2015, 08:40 --

It was just a joke.

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Post by Akosua + » 29 May 2018, 11:45

Oh what a nice poem. It played a trick on me. Thesaurus, u shouldn't have said that it was a joke because your readers will eventually know what it is

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Post by thaservices1 » 02 Jun 2018, 04:16

Ahhhhh, I love it! What wit!
"It is not the critic that counts..."
- Roosevelt

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