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Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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MnRen91
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Post by MnRen91 »

You know when the sun shines in
and shows all the hidden things
floating in the air?

That's what you do for me.
You show me every single
part of myself that
I could never see.
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The concept is so adorable I never ever thought of the possibility of comparing a feeling or something abstract to things that are hard to notice such as the particles in the air as the sun shines on it.
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