[b]Meaning of real love by Levis Ochiel [/b]

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[b]Meaning of real love by Levis Ochiel [/b]

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People go for physical beauty
They don't go for quality
They fall for one another
But they don't know about the other

They only think about their feelings
They forget about other people's feelings
They go for their reach
But they forget about going for their match

They just admire
They don't enquire
They go for sense gratification
They forget about perfection


They are influenced by the world to love
Their motives can't explain why they love
They just go for any love
They forget about requited love


Finally, they cry
Because they didn't decry
When they went for nothing
Instead of looking for something


You make love to be like a peg
Where you hang on it as you beg
When everything is but a disgrace
Then you realize you should seek God's grace
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