Freestyle Poetry

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Robert D Kumwenda
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TITLE: SHOW YOU CARE

Infant-hood, Child-hood, Adult-hood name them!
Of all the 'hoods', Orphan-hood is hardest
You have no home but hollow hearts you find
They rob rights and multiply your pain
An act insane the sane complain
You ain't a slave yet all the chores are yours
Street life is rough and the stay is tough
From dawn to dusk you drink and dine in dust
If you are there show you care
I will feel your care when you share.

Second verse of my very own composition. What is your take?
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Maha Fatima The Book Lover
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Post by Maha Fatima The Book Lover »

Awesome....And one of the harsh realities....The truth seen by all but felt by none🥺
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Robert D Kumwenda
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Maha Fatima The Book Lover wrote: ↑14 Apr 2022, 21:14 Awesome....And one of the harsh realities....The truth seen by all but felt by none🥺
Sad reality indeed, thanks for taking time to comment
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