Broken walls

[Loveth Rere]

I had walls before you swept me off my feet.
I woke up at the dead of the night and knew you hadn't texted.
It was then i kew you had broken every wall i had built,brick by brick.


You knew me ever before you came with words so sweet.
You had a wholesome smile that had my insides turning to mush like a fairy casted.
And now, I'm just waiting,hoping that you won't leave me with my broken walls,as the time goes,tok and tic

©Heephe

[Lopee]

This is for breakup, like after being in love with the person, did everything for the person only at the end you were deserted..oops it hurts.. like not knowing that all your efforts could come to a waste..hmmn it is well

[Kgomotso Maje]

We all have walls, and when we let people in, there's a chance they'll shatter us completely. That's why it's called vulnerability. Love makes us vulnerable. A good poem by the way.

[Kingcapitage]

A nice poem but some spelling is wrong, this is some kind of console for those heartbreaks. I love the write up

[POETIC PACIFIC]

Amazing poem and captivating. Congrats