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I feast
while my brothers starve.
I sleep
while my sisters shiver.
I live
while my children die.

I fear feelings of guilt lest
I feel guilty for feeling guilt.
There is a shame with my inner peace
in light of those whose filthy wealth
isn’t cloaked in such relief.

Pain is a mask I wear
to blend in a world of it.
Happiness is a curse I fear
in a world too devoid of it.
Loneliness is a shield I keep
in a world so crowded with it.
Love is a burden I hoard
in a world bursting at the seams with it.



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"That virtue we appreciate is as much ours as another's. We see so much only as we possess." - Henry David Thoreau

"Non ignara mali miseris succurrere disco." Virgil, The Aeneid
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Post by John Arun Kumar »

You have bared your heart! Touching words!!
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Post by Deborah Mumba 1 »

It's an awesome piece of thought, especially the where, " happiness is a curse I fear in the world too devoid of it.
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Post by Carol V »

You have personified a sector of society. We need such wake-up calls, such awareness. It stirred my thinking. Thank you.
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Post by Karen Hunnicutt »

That was so beautiful..!
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Post by Burnette Pitter »

I like it. Saying a lot that many refuse to.
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