Tikom Tikom Tikom

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Jeremiah77
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Tikom Tikom Tikom

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When the earth keeps flowing

And sometimes its motion stops

And I have no way of knowing

If the wheels have all gone up

I know not the sound of 'morrow

Whatever shape and form

The celestial bodies conspire--

To conjure

If I'm not certain of them all

But there lies one existential truth:

That as long as my heart beats

Though the sun may cease to shine

And the poet may forget his lines

Tikom tikom tikom

My heart will forever beat

On and on and on

I know how real the sound

Tikom tikom tikom

It says my love, my love, my love



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I saw the title and came here to see what it means. Really loved it. It's quite unique. It's started as a normal poem and ended with lots of love. Good job. Keep writing . Nice one🤩
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