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thisgirl818
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pull the gas
get the match
light the fire
I just want to burn it all
all the beautiful memories
every touch
every breath
I just want to burn it all
and get high on the smoke
of the the burning memories
you left outside the door
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I like how rapid the sentence structure is; it goes with the urgency of the narration.

Nice job!
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