Loneliness : as it is said to be

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Loneliness : as it is said to be

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Loneliness is woods whispering to the wind
It is the soothing cold of the winter morning
loneliness is the story told by the last leaf
it is the sweet melody of the soul
it is the song sung by the unknown
loneliness is the rhythm of the first rain
it is the sigh of the last bird
loneliness is the way less travelled
it is the music of the lost
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_ammuz_aami_ wrote: 02 Jun 2021, 10:41 Loneliness is woods whispering to the wind
It is the soothing cold of the winter morning
loneliness is the story told by the last leaf
it is the sweet melody of the soul
it is the song sung by the unknown
loneliness is the rhythm of the first rain
it is the sigh of the last bird
loneliness is the way less travelled
it is the music of the lost
Very nice poem. You did a good job capturing a concept which is difficult to translate in words.
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_ammuz_aami_ wrote: 02 Jun 2021, 10:41
Loneliness is woods whispering to the wind
It is the soothing cold of the winter morning
loneliness is the story told by the last leaf
it is the sweet melody of the soul
it is the song sung by the unknown
loneliness is the rhythm of the first rain
it is the sigh of the last bird
loneliness is the way less travelled
it is the music of the lost
When I first read that my whole imagination just turned ON. It's just beautiful. Great job!
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