P.O.P 1

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Abigail09
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P.O.P 1

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Today I woke up happy.
Everything feels right.
The birds chirping;
The sounds of the moving cars on the road;
They all sounded pleasing to the ears.
I woke up all smiles and took my time in my happy place.
Today I woke up happy.
I woke up all smiles
Everything feels in place today.
The things I have achieved become more glaring today.
They all flood my mind.
Everything feels right today.
Today I am happy.






P.O.P Power of Perception
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P.O.P 2


Today, it feels so hot.
I woke up early as usual.
The first thing that came to my mind was the pile of work waiting for me.
The birds are still chirping,
The cars are still moving.
But, Today I feel tired.
Maybe because of the heat.
Maybe because it's the fourth day of the work days.
Just maybe, there is a specific reason why I feel this way.
I feel the need to do more.
I need to do more...sigh.

P.O.P     Power of Perception
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Post by Kavita Shah »

That's Perception which is changing and taking new shapes each day.
I get a feeling it's beginning of the Weekend in P.O.P 1 and Thursday in P.O.P 2.😄
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