Try to Forget

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Abigail09
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Try to Forget

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I get reminded everytime I try to forget.

This is deep.
It's just so deep.
Behind feelings and memories suppressed,
Is the trigger that throbs them back to my consciousness.

It's just so deep.
That the challenges, the battles;
Whether won or not, leave these crumbs of feelings....
It's just so deep that
even when silence is all that is needed....
It's so deep that when tranquility is all that is craved for....
Sounds and Images clash up there;
In my head.


I get reminded everytime I try to forget...





You can try writing something with the title
'I get reminded everytime I try to forget'..capturing feelings; emotions; Joy , Love, pain and others as you wish.
I would love to read.😇
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Kavita Shah
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Post by Kavita Shah »

I get reminded everytime I try to forget you.
I saw you cry,
Fake tears they were.
It was so easy, yet you didn't tell me.
I wish you had told me.
My heart ached for you.
I got reminded every time I tried to forget you.
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Post by Abigail09 »

Kavita Shah wrote: 02 May 2021, 15:08 I get reminded everytime I try to forget you.
I saw you cry,
Fake tears they were.
It was so easy, yet you didn't tell me.
I wish you had told me.
My heart ached for you.
I got reminded every time I tried to forget you.

This is touching💓💔 .Nice one. Thanks for sharing.
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Kavita Shah
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:)
Thank you!
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